Time seemed to stand still as Nathan Brite pulled his newly refurnished Audi into the school parking lot. Students stopped in their tracks to watch him as he parked in his normal spot that had been empty for days. Conversations ceased as he swung the door open and eased himself out effortlessly. Even without looking at them, he knew what they were thinking. That's the kid who killed Kaitlin Cool's little sister.
I've always wondering how people who kill people accidently while driving can cope afterwards, so this'll be interesting to read. That sounds weird to be thinking but it's only because I was minutes behind driving past where a guy was killed a few days ago and then a boy exactly a year ago was killed by a 17year old on a motorbike...
Even though there is only a little so far, you've got a great writing style.
